29 October 2012

Exhale

Exhale,

like a filthy exhaust pipe 

that runs on the already fallen.


 (No, lazy I am not. I just can't describe in words how much the above words mean to me, or add to them for that matter)

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  1. That Random Game Blogger29/10/12 21:11

    No one said poems had to be long to have a meaning.

    as for my interpretation, mmmm.... lack of life, lack of energy, lack of a reason to live?

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    1. James M. Frost5/11/12 12:59

      True that certainly is abut the length.
      I'll leave you with that interpretation.

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  2. Gabriel Sigma1/11/12 06:03

    I love the shortness of this. Strong words and imagery.

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    1. James M. Frost5/11/12 12:58

      Thank you very much for that nice comment.

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